Ahh
Aha! Something a bit similar to my piece (Sleeping Beauty).
Some of your drum rhythms are good, but overall it seems unorganized?
This seems like a compilation of various melodies and drum rhythms.
But overal i can see the potential in this track :)
Good job
thankx a lot when i have the time i will check your sleeping beauty
Interesting
Although this isn't my cup of tea, the melody at 00:40 is pretty interesting haha.
You need a harder bass/synth to complete the DnB feel.
I do think your bass drum gets a bit too happy (lol) and creates some distortion especially at 2:03.
But other than, not bad for your first? :)
Gave you a generous score of 8/10 for EFFORT haha
lol. yeah, i didn't have any other ideas for a melody, thanks for the 8.
Groovy
Transition at 1:00 was pretty trippy haha
Really rhythmic and "industrialized" ;)
I like how the snare drum sounds kind of 8-bit =P
Well done!
Speaking of Pokemon in your reply to the previous comment,
you should check out a Pokemon remix I made xD
the trippiness of that section can be attributed to tweaking the parameters on the equalizer live time....
and i will definitely check your 'mon submission out
It's okay
It's pretty good
I think you could have add some more ghost snares
Also sometimes I think it feels pretty empty for some reason..
But good job nonetheless :)
Thank you for the review! I love it when people give criticism. I'll make sure think about that in my next song. :)
Pretty Good
It sounds pretty good but sometimes the audio "breaks" and you can hear grungy sounds ... or is it just my headphones? I think it's the backing guitar thats creating that grungy sound. Would have been more "metal" if you added double bass and some blast beats hahaha (but you used backing track so it doesn't really matter)
Other than that nice job! Some nice job on the improvisations :)
I learning guitar right now so I respect guitarists and their crazy fast fingers xD
- Zodiac
Yea, its most likely due to my recording equipment. I record on a budget and sometimes it shows in the recording quality, but hopefully the amount of awesomeness in the shredding makes up for the lack of audio quality.
Definetly Worth a DOWNLOAD
This song has such a great melody that it's relaxing to listen to even through the banging kick drums xD!
I thought most of the things present in this song is fantastic!
The piano intro is gorgeous.
I thought the voice doesn't sound bad at all with the autotune; it pretty much fits the song I think :O
However, only one thing that I quite don't like is the kick drum's volume. It's probably me but I think its a tad too loud compared to the soft melody and piano. But meh, that's just my opinion, don't take personally :)
I'm defintely going to download it and put it on my iPod and listen to it now and then. Great job on this song!
Hey thanks for the first review.
So you think the kick drum is a little loud huh?... easy enough to fix, if enough people mention it I'll certainly fix it before it becomes too late.
Thanks again
MMD
Simple yet Clean
I like it
It sounds pretty mellow (in my opinion) and it has a nice feel to it.
The beat is simple and clean, just like the way its supposed to be for this melody
And I don't mean to be an ass but did you spell "Beginning" wrong on purpose or was it a typo? xD
Nice job on the beat though!
Nice
The composition itself is very nice!
Though I feel that the cymbals (hi-hat, crash, ride) sounds are a bit too loud compared to the other drum sounds (snare & kick) [Just my opinion]
Otherwise, this is pretty good!
Yeah, I see what you mean.
It's fixed.
Thanks for letting me know.
Love the Melody
The Melody is fantastic!
Lots of great creative ideas can be utilized with this melody and that synth :]
I'm not too keen on them drum patterns though, but it doesn't bother me much xD
I hope you try it again!
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